Thursday, September 11, 2008

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The fairy godmother replied to her crying my dear crying won't bring back your dress so the fairy godmother waved her magic wand and her dress and hair became jello free and she thanked the fairy godmother Then she said thank you sooo much for everything that you have done With pleasure she hugged her and said now I must go to the wedding and be the most beautiful flower girl in the pictures

The bride to be had been waiting an extraneous time for her soon to be husband to arrive to the wedding and start the banter Whilst everyone was out enjoying the company waiting for the wedding to take place she began to ponder where the one thing she truly needed most out of everything (the love of her life) on this day was. Frantically and not giving a second glance to the vivacious stares of the crowd she began to wonder out looking for her love She wandered outside to the cloudy skies that had now become the backdrop for her wedding Looking frantically around she not once noticed the eyes that had been able to bore into her very soul and be able to make her feel eternally loved Then as she looked into the balcony she noticed those very eyes However they looked glossy with a pained and angry intensity behind them She then noticed he had a gun Unaware of her lovers intent a bullet shot through the crowd and she couldnt move quick enough away from it and then her dress shone in the bright red of blood and another shot was heard and then a thud on the balcony indicated he had shot himself too

1 comment:

One Moment Can Change Everything said...

I think this is very creative. I like how you use fairy tale images. Its seems as if you are writing to teens and Kindergarteners? am i correct? I also like how you used colors to describe how things looked. It was very imaginative!